From 115 to 33

I finished a much tighter draft of the "Walk across Florida" chapter last week. With all the interviews, articles, and book excerpts stacked up and ready to be summarized, it started out at about 115 pages. Over a couple months I condensed that to 33 pages. Over time I'll cut it further and add some good details. One big thing that needs development: Farris Bryant. He's gotta be a Goliath.